|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Alone
Contributed by
Zexen
on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:46:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
I didn’t go to school today,
I couldn’t,
Those people,
I can face them,
Their jeering echoes in my mind,
The pain is unbearable,
I hold my head,
For fear that my brain may just explode,
Their looks of disgust,
Pierce right into my soul,
Destroying what is left of it,
And leave with a hole,
The teachers glare at me,
Not feeling the pain I know,
They shout and scream at me,
For not doing my work at home,
They do not notice the others,
Ganging up on me behind my back,
Plotting my down fall,
The only part I like of school,
Is the walk home,
Where I can think in the pleasant afternoon sun,
While walking,
All alone,
Copyright ©
Zexen
... [
2004-04-20 15:46:35]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:50:38 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Wow this brings back memories, i hope things get better for you, but this was a wonderful wirte! Great job! |
|
|
Re: Alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:52:08 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
heh, this sounds familiar... enjoy every moment of those afternoons!! ;0)
~Remy~ |
|
|
Re: Alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:52:50 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| This was really good, could definitely feel your pain. |
|
|
Re: Alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by lonely_kakashi on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:33:31 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
felt like that sometimes when i was at school, way back when (says he, only 4yrs ago! lol) not too much, but you know when somethings there.
Great poem
:D
Kakashi |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
