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HOPE
Contributed by
blackprofit
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:20:38 PM in AEST
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4:27 AM 1/13/03
Hope
Searching for a world where inequity no longer has a purpose
A Virgin of service........fighting to alleviate burdens
Grandiose visions & big dreams.......how will I carry em out ???
an undercover martyr thats taking the back route
Striving for power to help the ones without a voice
From Black to broke, hungry & crying with no noise
I feel a deep passion for this that burns deep in my soul
But, what if it doesn't happen & I grow cold and old ???
Most of my life's a gamble-- I leave it to God's fate
Struggling to carry the weight that I must leave to faith
Living in an imperfect world preoccupied with greed and lust
One must regenerate the purity that has been broken down to dust....
Just a pillage for security with noone left to trust....
What if I am the devil in disguise with malevolent intentions ???
A leader of chaotic insurrections with threatening consequences
22-year-old ephemeral notions that my being's divine
Engulfed in shrines, sanctuaries, and institutions of all kind
Am I the One or a lost soul searching for nothing ???
All this work & Im the rapist that my mind was ******
My destiny's to search for something and keep it real without fronting
Inside I change, but my exterior seems far and distant
you just missed him, his aura......................
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Re: HOPE
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:40:05 PM AEST
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| Well done....only suggestion i have is that its a bit hard to read when its like this (paragraph form) |
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Re: HOPE
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:47:19 PM AEST
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Paragraphs and stanzas are for poems. This is prose, in my eyes. Very good prose. Prose which resonated with me, as I seem to think quite a bit like you. Don't ask. Just appreciate the comment.
Wish I was 22 again. A year of chaos, that was. Anyway - I'll pick out a line that I like now . . .
"Most of my life's a gamble-- I leave it to God's fate"
Yes. I think its very resonative.
Well expounded write.
Keep writing. |
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Re: HOPE
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:53:48 PM AEST
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Hello and a warm welcome to YPDC. I hope you like it here and I enjoyed your poem.
Kie |
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Re: HOPE
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by Soulrebel973 on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:14:29 AM AEST
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| What up eric...once again good sh t |
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