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Stopped caring
Contributed by
discantbelife
on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:20:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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It was pure silence,
It was all in my eyes,
No words were needed to be said,
"I'm sorry to report ma'am she's dead"
Sitting here,
thinking, pondering..
River flow of my tears
Her blood mixed in
It reminded me of a colored painting.
Searching now an answer,
Diary, journel..Anything to tell me why
Found a note...
Note read clearly:
You Stopped Caring For Me
Copyright ©
discantbelife
... [
2004-04-20 14:20:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Stopped caring
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:37:48 PM AEST (User
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Wow powerful! This is really good! Sad, but good |
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Re: Stopped caring
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:49:41 PM AEST (User
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oi, fast moving dramatic-type horror story... a good reminder of something important... good write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Stopped caring
(User Rating: 1 ) by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:02:23 PM AEST (User
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very thought-provoking and startling, and a good reminder that we need to be there for those we love |
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