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Nobodies Fool
Contributed by
parkman
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:09:41 PM in AEST
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It started when , I was only eight
Why me, why me, did you hate
I wish I knew, what I had done
To become part of, your twisted fun
Yes it started, when you were eight
You were there, it was not hate
An easy target, easy prey
For me to have power, over each day
You pulled my hair, punched my head
Gouged my face, until I bled
Battered me, black and blue
I was powerless, nothing I could do
I slapped you about, stole your money
Spat on you and thought it funny
Ripped your clothes, broke your arm
It was part of my game, I meant no harm
For four years long, you ridiculed me
But here it ends, now I’m free
I ran a blade, across my vein
It didn’t hurt, I was used to pain
Now you’re gone, it doesn’t matter
There’s plenty others, for me, to batter
To rule supreme, in my school
I’ll show you all, I am the fool
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parkman
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Re: Nobodies Fool
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:20:25 PM AEST
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| Wow powerful! Well done! Sad, and painful but well done! |
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Re: Nobodies Fool
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:36:20 PM AEST
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*ponders* don't know which side you're on, because this write seems a bit bipolar! interesting thou, well penned... ;0)
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Re: Nobodies Fool
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:55:47 PM AEST
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Bipolar and By god, a good write. I thougth this was a GW halfway through, until I realised that you were dicing with dual perspectives, one bully, another victim.
Yet another good rhyme (although not perfect) in an original theme.
4 stars. |
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Re: Nobodies Fool
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by arden on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:04:09 PM AEST
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Powerful! wow!
this was awesome. so dark and chilling. just amazing. i loved this. keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: Nobodies Fool
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by n2dep2care on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:07:05 PM AEST
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| Well done- getting both perspectives is unique and quite brillant! |
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Re: Nobodies Fool
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:30:52 PM AEST
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very cleverly done!
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Re: Nobodies Fool
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:23:34 PM AEST
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Very sad but abuse does begat abuse. Abusive parent create abusive children and bullies create bullies. Great write from opposing sides of the coin.
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