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Where's My Jacket?
Contributed by
remy
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:19:46 PM in AEST
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stupid trepidations calls for closure in vacations
while i can't lean on tradition
lost in simple savored superstitions.
so it's cloudy, i'm rowdy,
my face screams that i'm pouty.
all done, the moment's passed me,
no more, but now i'm asking
hey: where's my jacket?
i haven't found it.
and where's my package?
i'm waiting on you...
inverse dedication comes with sobered exclamations
i'm lost in the rendition
of the process paused to this condition:
it's not funny, i'm done he
can't make more mess with all the money.
oh well, the worry subsides,
but do tell, i can't seem to find
wait: no, where's my jacket?
i haven't found it.
and just where's my package?
i'm waiting on you...
breakdown, i'm feeling i'm insane
much worse than what's his name
oh no, there's no where else for me to go.
i've found, there's work left on the page
and so this mood is feeling strange
hey you, one day i know i'm coming soon.
cause of celebration loads for freshly made translations
suffer the worst of the emissions
so bad you have to ask permission
"hey daddy, oh daddy!"
it makes him mad, i'm glad he
can't escape the constant banter,
but please tell me - do you have the answer?
hey: where's my jacket?
i haven't found it.
now where's my jacket?
well i haven't found it.
and what about the package?
breakdown, i'm feeling quite insane
too much around what's her name
oh no, is there place left for me to go?
i've found, there's work left on the page
and so this mood is feeling changed
but you, you seem to know just what to do.
hey: where's my jacket?
i haven't found it.
and still what about you?
breakdown, breakdown, it's so insane
you can't say that you know me, well what's my name?
i found, i've found this page, every page.
but still you'll just lose me, still no name.
breakdown, breakdown, it's so insane
you can't say that you know me, and still no name.
Copyright ©
remy
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2004-04-20 13:19:46]
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Re: Where's My Jacket?
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:34:37 PM AEST
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| This is a bit funny, hope it was suppose to be |
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Re: Where's My Jacket?
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:00:26 PM AEST
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| great poem...liked it a lot |
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Re: Where's My Jacket?
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:56:22 PM AEST
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| something tells me this is about more than just ebay.... very good write. Hope you find that jacket...lol ;) |
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Re: Where's My Jacket?
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:04:50 PM AEST
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I felt like I was going insane reading this. With every stanza I was jumping to the next wondering what was going to happen. I really liked this poem alot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Can ya tell? LOL
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Re: Where's My Jacket?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:57:05 PM AEST
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that was so different i love your unique way of thinking.
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Re: Where's My Jacket?
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by lonely_kakashi on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:25:43 PM AEST
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Great poem...just wanted to keep reading,
im sure the tempo gets faster the further down the page u go! lol
:D
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Re: Where's My Jacket?
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 12:59:05 AM AEST
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| i know exactly how you feel remy, exactly. this was humorous and lighthearted, i don't know what you meant for it to be, but it made me smile, great write |
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