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Your Letters
Contributed by
reilt
on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:19:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Saved every letter you sent.
Gave it all away,
Into temptation,
Into sin.
Forgiven when I forgave...If I could.
I wasted time
And all the while
Inhaled the impurity
Of your lies,
Choked on the stench
Of a mistruth
Halved and quartered
Then hung from my heart.
And to think...
You signed them
Love.
Copyright ©
reilt
... [
2004-04-20 13:19:21]
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Re: Your Letters
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:24:22 PM AEST
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oi, bitter taste left in the end... or so it seems. interesting write, tough to swallow down without feeling it thou... erg.
~Remy~ |
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Re: Your Letters
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by eternallyloved on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:23:42 AM AEST
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Impressive. So intrigueing. Beautifully written, i too have experienced this. Stay strong, and heres a hint, put the letters in a box and hide them...by the time u find them again you will be over him. they will be a good laugh, lol. Keep it up.
God Bless
~Shayna |
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Re: Your Letters
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 08:03:49 AM AEST
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| Heartbreak is a great source of inspiration sometimes, isn't it? You've definitely drawn on yours to craft a great poem. |
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