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Scream And Dream
Contributed by
bleeding_chains
on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 11:15:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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A scream
That pierces through my soul
It's mine
And it peels the flesh from my bone
Leaving me naked to the world
Now you'll all know my secrets
As you stand near me listening for the words
The words that scream mercy
The words that push you away
Screaming leave me alone
Let me die in peace
Covered by the black night sky
Comforting me with silk
Where i can dream that everythings okay
But it will never be good
Good for me
Good for you
Never
Copyright ©
bleeding_chains
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2004-04-20 11:15:16]
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Re: Scream And Dream
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 11:32:47 AM AEST
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| its very dark, with deep emotion, but the way its put together is very good. its great. thanks for sharing! |
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Re: Scream And Dream
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:55:06 PM AEST
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it's good to scream sometimes, but hopefully time to rest comes along the way all as well. haunting write, enjoyable... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Scream And Dream
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:07:16 PM AEST
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i love screaming.. and i love this poem.. it's excellent..
charlotte x_x_x
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Re: Scream And Dream
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 12:55:22 AM AEST
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loved this poem very descriptive and dark.
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