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Where Roses Bleed
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 10:40:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
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So still the night around her
As perfumed candles softly dance
To the breath of tears now falling
Upon the petals in her hands
Glistening drops of memories
Cascade slowly down her face
As she is taken back through time
To a once upon a place
Where once she was a dancer
Upon a stage dressed in his smile
And blood red roses were an offering
With hat in hand,he showed his style
A nearing stranger in the shadows
He faltered from the light
Tossing blood red roses
Then softly whispering goodnight
These moments were so long ago
Still they're etched within her mind
As trembling fingers caress each petal
Her heart, it falls behind
Seeing is believing
She knows now she must move on
Though beautiful memories remain
The blood red roses have all gone
Somewhere in the stillness
Beyond the beating of her heart
There cries a thousand roses
Blood red and torn apart
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Re: Where Roses Bleed
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by Alli on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 10:53:28 AM AEST
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| Wow. Honestly, this has to be one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read. The rhyming is incredible, the descriptions are clever, and the word manipulation is brilliant. On a scale of one to ten, this poem is 100. VERY well done. |
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Re: Where Roses Bleed
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 11:23:09 AM AEST
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Yes, we cannot live forever in the past, but for some of us it is a much nicer place to be. It is hard to let go of such love and memories. I think you have to find a good reason to move on before you will try. I, as of now, still prefer the past. Beautiful, thought provoking write.
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Re: Where Roses Bleed
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by amalyna on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 11:38:17 AM AEST
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beautifully done.
very nice write! |
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Re: Where Roses Bleed
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 12:42:55 PM AEST
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Beautifully Written The rhyming is Wonderful...
I Like It Alot !!!!!!!!! Keep Em Coming :-)
******LoVe**AnGeL******
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Re: Where Roses Bleed
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:36:30 PM AEST
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This is truly beautiful breathtaking perfect and above all a masterpiece.
One of the most phenomenal poems I have ever read
First rate
I have saved this in my file
Love Sweetangeluk |
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Re: Where Roses Bleed
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:24:08 PM AEST
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talent flows from your pen...so sad
Shari |
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Re: Where Roses Bleed
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:36:48 PM AEST
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| very pretty sharon:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Where Roses Bleed
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:30:53 AM AEST
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ever so lovely and breathtaking yet painful undertones............
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Re: Where Roses Bleed
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 10:26:12 AM AEST
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wow that was something refreshing and altogether blue provoking
PFR |
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