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Unwanted
Contributed by
willow_tara72002
on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 10:21:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Pain is all I feel
Shame is all that’s real
Blame is how I deal
Sadness that will never heal
Rejected is how they treat me
Freak is all they see
Weird is all I’ll be
Ugly is what I am
Stupid is all I ever can
Suicide is all I ever think
Paranoia pushing me towards the brink
Anger coming to control
Hatred they all throw
Betray is all they ever do
Loneliness I’m out through
Afraid because of you
Guilty for no reason to
Annoying everything and who
Unwanted
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2004-04-20 10:21:05]
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Re: Unwanted
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 11:46:22 AM AEST
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i'm proberly wrong, but from the way you wrote this it sounds like you're a student, getting crap from bullies at school, and things aren't ok at home.
I'M ONE TOO!!!
this is the kind of style i oftern write in. i haven't got prioblems at home anymore, but i always have problems in school. they crowed around and hit me and my best mate yesterday.
so i know what it's like, ( if thats is what you're talking about). you can always talk to me if you want...
~deathdrop~ |
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Re: Unwanted
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:16:51 PM AEST
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i remember feeling things like these. extreme opinions of always and never are fangerous wordings thou, such is the case as i've seen it... good write! ;0)
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