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Suicidal Tradgedy
Contributed by
silent
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:47:05 AM in AEST
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Look within
Stare outside
What's found
All around
Hidden dark
Beautiful park
Wishing more
Deaths door
False truth
Smiling booth
Children play
Adults slay
Feelings crushed
Suicide brushed
Aside again
No-more pain
Anger felt
Cards dealt
Not read
Now dead
Wonder why
People try
Suicide
Look inside
You’ll find
Your answer
Next time
You see
Someone with
Deaths wish
Alone, afraid
Awaiting trade
Stop
For one
Minute only
Show them
Someone cares....
Copyright ©
silent
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2004-04-20 08:47:05]
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Re: Suicidal Tradgedy
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by arden on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 09:13:00 AM AEST
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this was awesome. i love how it was written. a very deep and emotional write. well done my friend. keep it up.
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Re: Suicidal Tradgedy
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by katyqueen35 on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 09:21:59 AM AEST
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| That's deep.I like it alot.great write. |
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Re: Suicidal Tradgedy
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:32:38 PM AEST
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simple and deep, an awesome write... and a good reminder. i like it! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Suicidal Tradgedy
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 11:36:31 PM AEST
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Great write Silent... :)
Lindsey |
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Re: Suicidal Tradgedy
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:13:24 AM AEST
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Wonderful imagery in a silent plea for love and human attention.
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: Suicidal Tradgedy
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by JennyFruFru on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:46:12 PM AEST
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| wow i really like the style it was written and how it was written and the topic it was written about..... |
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Re: Suicidal Tradgedy
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:47:05 AM AEST
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Wow! Love this! I was thinking of taking up Eternityslyre's challenge in the forum and trying to do my life this way, but I think you would be far more capable of pulling that off.
Nice stuff.
Stitch |
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Re: Suicidal Tradgedy
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:48:43 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write, but very very sad. That would be a tradegy. |
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Re: Suicidal Tradgedy
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:09:13 PM AEST
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all we can do is be there with love and hugs and knowing when i was there; there was no one, i do my best, beautiful poem:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->- |
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Re: Suicidal Tradgedy
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 08:02:08 AM AEST
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Wow Ben, i like this style...
The subject too...brilliant write.
Phil xxx |
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