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Smoke
Contributed by
alisialynn
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:10:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I wandered as a child thru a thick, veiling, lying smoke.
The smoke of cigarettes that lied to me,
Propaganda advertised to me
By the people I looked up to most.
The smoke that seeped from under closed doors,
The smoke that lied and beguiled and troubled my youth
The nauseating and mysterious smoke of a life that ignores
The crisp reality smoke, a desirable serum of truth
It was the smoke of maturity,
The smoke of adulthood
Copyright ©
alisialynn
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2004-04-20 03:10:19]
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Re: Smoke
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:58:19 AM AEST
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| hey, i like this somthing we can all relate too. |
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Re: Smoke
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:18:35 PM AEST
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heh, and still there'll be someone to make the smoke... interesting write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Smoke
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by Kittenfantastico on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:45:03 AM AEST
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| Good poem I like it. |
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