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to my father
Contributed by
saha
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:26:36 AM in AEST
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you won't tell me what
to do, what to say
and what to think
this is my life
and I will do what I want
I don't know how to talk to you
I won't try again
never said a word of discontentment
thought it thousand times
but now i'm leaving home
by morning light I will be a half way to anywhere
burning all bridges
and closing all doors
goodbye
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saha
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2004-04-20 02:26:36]
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Re: to my father
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:51:23 AM AEST
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| This is good i hope that things have gotten better! But this is a good write! |
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Re: to my father
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by Dina on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:49:17 AM AEST
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| It doesn't suck as you say, it's full of feelings. But if you want my advice, he just wants what is best for you. I know that you don't want to listen to such a thing, but I've been there as well when i was a teen ager. Now that i am married and have kids of my own, I go to him for advice although we were always fighting then. Remember that he loves you, I hope the best for you. |
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Re: to my father
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by katyqueen35 on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:05:28 AM AEST
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i am sure his trying to do his best by you.
I wish my father was there when i was your age.he died when i was 3 so really think this through before you do something you regret.
I felt the this way about my mom when i was your age and then i did took off .and it was not a good experirence for me.so take care.by the way good write. |
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Re: to my father
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:36:35 AM AEST
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| I feel this way about my mom now..i did move out..i'm doing pretty good..great write. |
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