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Fall
Contributed by
amalyna
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:23:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You're hardening my senses
And throwing up my defenses
And I fear the day will come when I don't care at all
But it's your life and yours to live it
And if I cannot forgive it
Then you and I weren't meant to be after all
And it's a long way down to fall
From where we're standing
But these trials on my heart
Are so demanding
You chide me when I cry
But if I'm forced to say goodbye
You won't have to be around to hear my bawl
I won't apologize for caring
And I don't see it as wrong
I feel as if I'm seeing someone
I was wrong about all along
And it hurts me when we argue
It cuts straight to my heart
But I guess it's just a part of you
I hid from from the start
And I guess I'll learn to live with it
Or then again maybe I won't
I don't want to judge unfairly
And I pray to God I don't
But the part of me that's aching
Only knows what I feel is true
And the heart in me that's breaking
Only wants to protect you
I wish I'd thought before I acted
I wish I knew a way to explain
It's hard to bear the brunt on wounds
By words never meant to cause you pain
But if it's a crime to love you
I guess I'm guilty anyway
'Cause it's the one thing I can't change
It's the one thing I can say
Foundations built on false pride
I choose to fly instead of crawl
But I can't put myself above you
So to catch you, should you fall
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amalyna
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2004-04-20 01:23:46]
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Re: Fall
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:59:02 AM AEST
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This wowed me away.....this is really good! This is great! i really liked this part:
Foundations built on false pride
I choose to fly instead of crawl
But I can't put myself above you
So to catch you, should you fall
GREAT JOB! |
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Re: Fall
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:17:39 AM AEST
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Very good writing!
shows much wisdom and luv.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Fall
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:10:05 AM AEST
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Wow, This is really really good stuff, Big pat on the back to you. I really like it. Make sure you keep it up.
Great Job.
- Stacy |
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