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This Fire
Contributed by
amalyna
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:12:21 AM in AEST
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The chill in the air
So much harder to bear
There's nowhere I can hide
The silence it screams
So much louder it seems
Without you by my side
I want you to know
We only can grow
From the time we have to share
I want you to see
It's not easy for me
To get up the courage to care
But when you're beside me
I know I can't hide me
I open my heart to you
If this fire should burn
I can't ask in return
But I promise my heart to be true
Love has its surmises
Life's full of suprises
We must learn to seize the day
Though there's pain to endure
A chance taken's worth more
Than the one let slip away
Copyright ©
amalyna
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2004-04-20 01:12:21]
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Re: This Fire
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:47:06 AM AEST
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| Good write and wonderful lesson! Great job you have a great talent here keep up the good work! |
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Re: This Fire
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:17:40 AM AEST
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Very good write and I luv that last line.
It's all in the attitude one has and I luv your attitude.
luv, huggs, take a chance,
emy |
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Re: This Fire
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 04:48:52 AM AEST
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| well written, chances are good............ nothing ventured, nothing gained? hugs n' love nessa |
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