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After The Rain
Contributed by
amalyna
on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:00:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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After the rain a heavy thickness settles o'er the street
And clouds the minds of those who venture into the outside world.
A haziness that hangs down from the cold, gray-splotched sky
Puts your mind on edge, your thoughts confused and swirled.
Surroundings, void of color, seem a cold, ubiquitous gray
Light seems but a memory, and darkness still is looming.
Precious few are seen about, void of all emotion
Lost inside the vastness of a silence so consuming.
Darkness soon will settle in, the sky fade a deep blue
And the feeling of surreality will fade just as fast.
Under the streetlight the wet pavement glistens from the rain
The only indication of the storm which now has passed.
Copyright ©
amalyna
... [
2004-04-20 01:00:04] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: After The Rain
(User Rating: 1 ) by eternallyloved on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:05:08 AM AEST (User
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Beautifully written. Paints a vivid picture.
Impressive. Stick to it. I look foward
to reading more of your work.
God Bless!
~*Shayna*~ |
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