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A moment with you
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 12:36:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If I could
I know I would
I would give you the world
From which I stood
I'd give you the stars
And the heavens above
If you'd only give me
A piece of your love
A moment with you
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Re: A moment with you
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 12:38:33 AM AEST
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It's short and sweet...bittersweet... I know the feeling. All you need is that breath of his/her air... that gaze, that touch... and you'll be in heaven forever.
Lindsey
PS. Awesome write. |
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Re: A moment with you
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 12:42:37 AM AEST
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sometimes a shortened piece is all you need, you shared your heart... it's substancial, and good! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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