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Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 12:06:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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These white walls, splattered
with blood, now
the waiting room to my life is full, so
go to hell
go to hell
go to hell
LEAVE ME THE ***** ALONE!!
I don't want you in my life.
I don't want anyone in my life
what makes you think i do??
You people ***** suck...
You make me ***** sick.
I'm going to kill you.
ALL of you.
I'm going to hit you in the kneecaps
with a Louisville Slugger
until you can't ***** breathe.
Would you like that?
I'm going open your stomach
with a steak knife,
then pull out your intestines
and strangle you with them...
Would you like that?
I didn't think so.
I think you are reading this thinking,
"This is kind of harsh..."
Well, what the ***** do you want?
I'm not gonna ***** kiss your ass.
I HATE YOU.
Or maybe you are thinking,
"This guy's ***** sweet."
Well, I STILL ***** hate you.
Please don't take it personal.
I wouldn't care if you did anyway.
I HATE YOU.
So ***** off.
Really.
I don't want anyone in my life.
You'll all just end up hurting me anyway.
You always do.
[ This black heart will never serve ]
never sever
i know you'd like it if i died...
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2004-04-20 00:06:35]
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Re: Off
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 12:54:17 AM AEST
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ooo, fiesty one now... gut-wrechning - literally! lol... oh wow, intruiging write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Off
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:00:44 AM AEST
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| Really full of anger, but good write! |
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Re: Off
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:11:47 AM AEST
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| the title is supposed to be ***** off but some wise ass mod thought it would look better as 'off' good *****in job. *flips bird* |
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Re: Off
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by MissLee on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:01:04 AM AEST
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| well, that was very descriptive, i hope it wasn't about me, i'm really sorry, it was a very good poem, a lot of emtion. G |
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Re: Off
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by MissLee on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:02:26 AM AEST
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| ood job |
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Re: Off
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 07:46:45 AM AEST
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Black Heart? lol. I like that.
Nothing like a good rage now and again. |
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Re: Off
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 10:04:00 AM AEST
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| hmm.. thats *cough*nice*cough* um..kinda angry mate. well i know how you feel. good write.. *hugs* |
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Re: Off
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by vampyrekiss on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:53:28 PM AEST
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| i really like this and have felt like that to so good job GREAT writting keep it up :) |
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Re: Off
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:11:27 PM AEST
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hmm this was interesting... dripping with anger which was evident I guess. I wouldn't like it if you died, but I think u know that. Keep up the writing man.
Bobo (Joel) |
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