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She
Contributed by
Dragontear27
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 10:55:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She loves me, she loves me not
the woman i love is to blind to see
the good part inside of me
can this love be real or just a plot?
She doesn't realise my love for her
everytime i say i love you its only in my head
sometimes i regret what i've said
my problems seem to be just a blurr
Because when i'm with you all my worrys float away
to me you're my only concern
and the passion in my heart aches and burns
I wish i could be with you day after day
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Dragontear27
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2004-04-19 22:55:13]
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Re: She
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by full_blur on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 12:19:01 AM AEST
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I don't think its crappy, I think its from the heart and expresses true feelings and that can never be bad :)
(besides any poem that rhymes with the word blur is automagically cool) |
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Re: She
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 01:29:39 AM AEST
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I agree... it's not crappy... ur just expressing what and how u feel... u can't ask for more than that... great poem
Don't give up... keep writing...
~Donna~ |
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