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HEART POISON - 41504
Contributed by
heartpoison
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:16:22 PM in AEST
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HEART POISON - 4/15/04
a poisoned heart
with a sickly stare
left unstitched
left uncared
filled with venom
nothing else to do
save my heart
bring it to you
make it your own
the corruption will ease
it aches and it burns
but do with it what you please
it's tainted, it's tattered
it's torn in half
it's broken and beaten
and you aren't that daft
you can cure this disease
that flows within this vein
i'm fully convinced
you like to see me in pain
it's misused and still untreated
dehuminized and violated
we're losing it fast, please help
so sick and contaminated
this broken heart is useless
it's lost and deteriorated
there's no way to save it
it's simply disintegrated
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Re: HEART POISON - 41504
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:58:44 PM AEST
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Wow- This is brilliant and Very Powerful. Excellent work on this, I love it.
Hugs 'n Love
- Becca |
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Re: HEART POISON - 41504
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 11:34:32 PM AEST
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| any attempt to describe the greatness of this poem is still inferior and does injustice. |
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