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I Miss You
Contributed by
rockinchicky07
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:00:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I miss you more then I've ever missed anything.
you are the missing sun in my open sky.
you are my everything and more.
Your voice is heaven to my virgin ears, your tone harmonous to mine.
when you laugh my entire body begins to lift, and it fills all the blanks in my heart.
Alone in my peaceful thought, you stand, with no interuptions.
If just one thing in the entire world could make me happy, it would be a future
image of us.
you and me togther even if only for a moment.
A breif moment just to hold you so tight and so close to my heart.
to tell you how much you mean to me.
And hear your gentle voice whisper sweet tunes in my forever waiting ears.
Your strong hands make me feel so safe.
With your arms wrapped tight around me,I'm on top of the world and nothing can replace that feeling.
Not even the highest moutain is as high on life as I am when I'm with you.
It's an unfelt feeling that no one should have to go through.
It rips my heart apart, whips it on my sleeve and becomes so vulnerable, anything could destroy it.
It's so great though.
I'm so high I can't sleep at night because
when I'm laying in my bed and starring at the ceiling i see your face.
I jurk up because i swear i hear your
voice. But it's jsut my dream tricking me into believing your here.
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2004-04-19 21:00:12]
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Re: I Miss You
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by Mortis-Dark on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:04:52 PM AEST
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Nice write. Quite different from the others. Good job!!
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Re: I Miss You
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by StarSpark on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:15:11 PM AEST
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| Good Write, the Deep discription was great. |
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