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Moonlit Night
Contributed by
Angelic_Demon
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:46:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The night t'was beautiful,
the room lit only by candles.
It t'was a spell that she was working that night,
under the moonlight.
Her spell working was an offering to the Goddess.
Thanking her and acknowledging her.
This was in the olden days,
when they didn't accept her ways.
She did her spellworking in secret,
hiding her things, keeping them safe.
She was a Witch, afraid to speak of her ways,
knowing that not many would accept them.
Bringing out a sachet,
she finished her last stitchings.
T'was white, for healing and protection,
she had this in mind as she stuffed it with cinnamon.
But then she heard a voice.
She stopped, breath haulting.
Door slamming, feet pounding.
She heard more voices, someone moving up the stairs.
She moved quickly.
Blew out the candles,
and hid the herbs.
Then she uncast the circle.
But it was too late.
Her husband saw her ritual things.
Her heart froze, skipping a beat.
He was frowning at her and holding a bible.
"I'm caught, oh no..." she thought.
Her heart ached as he moved towards her.
Her secret was out.
She backed up, but he still moved.
"Witch," he hissed.
"I knew, but I never thought..."
She gulped.
He eyed her suspiciously.
That night was her last spell casting night.
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Re: Moonlit Night
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:49:31 PM AEST
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This is awesome hun. I really loved it- its written perfectly and the message is strong- kinda reminds me of the Salem Witch Trials thingy i was watching on telly the other night 8-)
Anyways, great work and write more!
Hugs 'n Love
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Re: Moonlit Night
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by Kie on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:57:09 PM AEST
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I have to agree that this was outstanding.
Loved every word.
Kie
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Re: Moonlit Night
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:06:16 PM AEST
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mara this is excellent, you just whipped this one right out lol, i love this, totally, your poem a strong story:) hugs n' love mom xxx
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Re: Moonlit Night
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:27:25 PM AEST
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damn girl...all I can say is this sounds like my second wife LMAO. Outstanding and spellbinding write.
very well done
Roses
Parry ;oP |
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Re: Moonlit Night
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:19:42 PM AEST
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Watch out for those who don't understand the wiccan ways - a bewtiching poem.
witchy
merry |
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Re: Moonlit Night
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:50:08 PM AEST
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You weave your tale like a Dreamweaver.....
Well Done. |
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Re: Moonlit Night
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by Princesaazul16 on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 03:32:38 PM AEST
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| Thats so cool, i wonder what happens after he found out she was a witch. Great Job! |
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Re: Moonlit Night
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by yellow_sundragon on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:29:06 AM AEST
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How did I miss this?? Oh, well, it rocks...
I really apprieciate it because I'm part of the "We'll never forget" group about salem witches...
Jaime |
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