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The Donkey
Contributed by
Randibee85
on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 07:27:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You tell me I need help?
Well, look at you
You see into my imperfections
But you should think of you
You make me sick
To think I had you
What could I have been thinking
If I only knew...
That you would be a *******
That's right
That I would have to beat you off
Even tonight
I'm no longer wanting to be even friends
You betrayed me
How could you?
You were afraid to be a man
You were afraid to be there while I'm battling for my life
You looked through my diary
You screwed up my life
You think I'd be attracted to a long hair, bangy clothed nerd?
THINK AGAIN!
I don't even want you as a friend!
Copyright ©
Randibee85
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2004-04-19 19:27:10]
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Re: The Donkey
(User Rating: 1 )
by eviegirl on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 07:38:30 PM AEST
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| I like your writing style, I like how you can express yourself. You seem extremely angery, but you can share it in a way that everybody can understand. |
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Re: The Donkey
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by Randibee85 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 07:41:11 PM AEST
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| Soooo sorry, I meant an *******. :> I don't know how to edit and the poem came out of nowhere. I was just writing... Messing around with the site. |
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Re: The Donkey
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 02:41:18 PM AEST
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A powerful outpouring of emotion. Better out than in!
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