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Picture Perfect
Contributed by
New_York_Chick
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:44:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Stay,
Don't Look Away
You're Picture Perfect
Can't Hide From Your Image
Haunted By Your Smile
But In A Good Way
So Let Me Enjoy It For Awhile
Without Words
I Can Feel What You Think
A Secret Intention
Trying To Get It Across
Everytime You Blink
Stay,
Don't Look Away
You're Picture Perfect
Differ The Expression
As I Listen To You Breath
I Don't Have To Look Inside
To Know What's Underneath
We Communicate
And No One Has To Understand
At This Point
Let Love Work On It's Own
And It Will Expand
Stay,
Don't Look Away
You're Picture Perfect
Copyright ©
New_York_Chick
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2004-04-19 18:44:52]
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Re: Picture Perfect
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 07:23:53 AM AEST
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Do you ever see stanzas in a poem and think--why didn't I write that? or I wish I had written that!
"Differ The Expression
As I Listen To You Breath
I Don't Have To Look Inside
To Know What's Underneath"
This stanza was priceless and my favorite in the poem. One of a kind.
Kie
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by nanette on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 07:16:40 PM AEST
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Awesome Write, exceptional job, wow
Thank you for sharing
~Nanette |
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by nanette on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 07:20:11 PM AEST
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Wanted to vote forgot, here I go
Thank you
~Nanette |
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Re: Picture Perfect
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 12:53:18 AM AEST
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as we say in England "jolly good work" This is very well written i particulary enjoyed your reinforcement of the picture perfect message.
wildej. |
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