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Light Surrounds Me
Contributed by
patar420
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:39:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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firelight
across the sky
dances with me
moonlight
shines through my window
it whispers sweet melodies
sunlight
creeps out at dawn
it nudges me gently to awake
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Re: Light Surrounds Me
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:45:35 PM AEST
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Great poem i really like this part:
firelight
across the sky
dances with me |
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Re: Light Surrounds Me
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by eternallyloved on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:47:01 PM AEST
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| So simple, yet so touching. A well written peice. Beautiful symbolism. Im very impressed. Keep it up. God Bless. ~Shayna |
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Re: Light Surrounds Me
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by ThicKnesS on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:56:55 PM AEST
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| I like how it makes you see things from a different perspective. post more..... |
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Re: Light Surrounds Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:31:53 PM AEST
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Still reeling from my sore shin!!! lol
Nicely done here!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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