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Heres to Our Future
Contributed by
eternallyloved
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:09:23 PM in AEST
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To you who one day will be there for me,
you do not know me now,
however, u will love me for who I will be.
You do not know me now,
however, it is in me that one day you will see,
those things you’ve always looked for,
those things that you adore,
those little things in life,
that make you cherish someone so much more.
I find myself at times,
in turmoil over who you will be,
though I’m confident our beloved God,
has you perfectly matched to me.
I want you to know I will love you,
in me, true love and understanding you will find.
How can a love that will be so awesome,
at this time be so incredibly blind.
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eternallyloved
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Re: Heres to Our Future
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:32:04 PM AEST
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| Great job! Your getting even better! |
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Re: Heres to Our Future
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by ThicKnesS on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:59:39 PM AEST
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| this one touched me. i can truly relate and i'm sure others can also. |
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Re: Heres to Our Future
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by brookiecookie02 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:41:28 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem! im definatly looking foward to seeing more of your work! |
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Re: Heres to Our Future
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:23:33 AM AEST
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Better. Good write. Author Note is more of something that would draw me in. Good expression, I can feel the emotion. One of your better ones.
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Re: Heres to Our Future
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:22:09 AM AEST
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Well done! I like the wistfulness, and the way you go straight to the heart of the person you dream of. You know him, and yet you don't. I admire the trust in hope.
Ah, but it is often a dark path to walk, isn't it? I know how you feel. Only the glimmer of a distant dawn to follow...
Take care now.
Andrew |
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Re: Heres to Our Future
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by GODSBESTIMAGE on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:19:59 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem.
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