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~untitled~
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:01:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Don't try and save me
I just want you to see
Alone in this fight
Struggle as I might
Locked inside
Must always hide
Keep away the pain
My loss and your gain
It's not a game
My secret shame
Bleeding skin
I did it again
Razor in hand
I take my stand
Relief you will bring
With a little sting
Crimson red you will flow
As I watch the puddle grow
Copyright ©
vampyrekiss
... [
2004-04-19 17:01:13]
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Re: ~untitled~
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by eternallyloved on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:14:56 PM AEST
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| Powerful. A good write. I like your style. Im sorry if you have gone through this. Keep up the good work. God Bless. |
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Re: ~untitled~
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:57:10 PM AEST
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| i agree. very powerful. good write. hope you feel good gain soon. hugs. phil xxx |
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Re: ~untitled~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:54:50 PM AEST
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This is brilliant- another stunning write from you. I can definitly relate to this- such a simple method for such short but powerful release.
Hugs 'n Love
- Becca |
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