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Tears running down
Contributed by
lildrama04
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:47:09 PM in AEST
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Tears running down
the inside of my body
building up inside of me
that it hurts so much.
People all around me
making fun of me because
of the way that I look
and the way that I am
I wish inside of my
soul every night before
I go to bed that just for one day
people can leave me alone
But I know that it will never
happen cause all this pain
that is inside of me will not
go away.
Tears running down
the inside of my body
building up inside of me
that it hurts so much.
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lildrama04
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Re: Tears running down
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by eternallyloved on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:50:13 PM AEST
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| Im sorry you had to endure these feelings. this is a well written poem and it evokes emotion. Keep it up. |
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Re: Tears running down
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by n2dep2care on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:59:03 PM AEST
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| Beautiful and Sad poem. Very Excellent! You are not alone in feeling this way. I know your pain all too well. I found that writing helped me to get a lot of the inside tears out- and relieve much of the pain and hurt. Please keep writing, and expressing your feelings in this way. I guarantee if you do, you will become a brilliant poet! Bravo! Keep it coming! |
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Re: Tears running down
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by patar420 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:47:01 PM AEST
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| hey, i understand wut ur goin through, but you have an amazing writing talent, and that helps me at my worst of times. |
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Re: Tears running down
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by Clintlover21 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:21:32 PM AEST
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Heyz i know how you feel itz just in skool im the same way im popular but they talk about me behind my back just dont worry your probley a nice person who they have to get to know but that is how today is!! I wish you theh best of luck and remember if you give into them they have won just keep your head high and dont worry you'll see what is going to happen to them
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Re: Tears running down
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 07:27:50 PM AEST
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this tore me apart inside because ppl can be so damn cruel, but don't let them get to you since they don't know the first thing about you. hang in there and keep on writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Tears running down
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by Randibee85 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 07:34:14 PM AEST
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I completely understand.... PLEASE do something for that! WHATEVER it may be! Because with me, I got sick... I got an illness because I see myself the way those people a while ago teased me....
FAT, CHUBBY, HEFTY, CHUNKY!
I couldn't take it...
I'm sorry if you're in pain.
Get better, ok? |
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