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Natures Conception
Contributed by
eternallyloved
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:29:54 PM in AEST
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Not spoiled or stained by society,
what you meant for me to see stands before me.
The extraordinary creations of your hand,
laid out so very carefully.
Every minuscule detail,
a wondrous work of your majesty.
How great is your love?
Your kiss on each inch of ground.
I know now what you desire me to know,
there is magnificence all around.
Copyright ©
eternallyloved
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2004-04-19 16:29:54]
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Re: Natures Conception
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:52:58 PM AEST
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| Great job! You have a great talent, i would suggest that you write something about your poem in the authors note though people tend to bypass poems that are beggin for comments! But good job |
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Re: Natures Conception
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by brookiecookie02 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:40:02 PM AEST
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this definatly makes us relize how beautiful Gods creation is! i hope u write more and more poems!!
-brooke |
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Re: Natures Conception
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by Randibee85 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 07:31:56 PM AEST
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| That's very sweet. |
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Re: Natures Conception
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:21:47 AM AEST
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Good poem... nice rhymes...good style...very unique.
Lindsey
PS. If you write a different authors note maybe more people would be inclined to read it. |
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