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Your Sacrifice
Contributed by
eternallyloved
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:27:31 PM in AEST
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I thank you for your sacrifice Dear Lord,
because of my sins, your son died.
Tortured and stabbed with a wooden sword,
then hung on a cross to be crucified.
You claimed to be God's son and were ignored,
they accused you of blasphemy and having lied.
By countless Christians you are adored,
however, the love of many you were denied.
My innocence, through your death restored,
during your last moments it was my name you cried.
It is to you my heart I have poured,
and upon your word I have relied.
Now it is you I pray toward,
I know in our walk I'll never go untried.
I want none of my heart to by you be unexplored,
that's the part of me you live inside.
Copyright ©
eternallyloved
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2004-04-19 16:27:31]
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Re: Your Sacrifice
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:46:04 PM AEST
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| good job! Keep up the good work |
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Re: Your Sacrifice
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:37:50 PM AEST
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All the elements of fine poetry are here. Great topic,nice rhyming scheme, and a flow and rhythm. Now hone the rhythm so it flows effortlessly off your tongue. This poem is very well done!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Your Sacrifice
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by brookiecookie02 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:38:05 PM AEST
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i LOVE this poem!
u r very talented keep up the good work!!
-brooke |
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Re: Your Sacrifice
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:20:24 AM AEST
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very nice for a beginner...
Lindsey |
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