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I died dat nite!
Contributed by
persia
on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 03:50:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Stabbed me in da back
Wen i ran after him 4 so damn long
Just 2 hold his hand
or da back of his shirt
But he kicked me away
Took everyting
Dat he claimed dat he gave
So **** him and his ******s 2
Been thru **** dat
A child should'nt be near
Da cracked out mother
Da runaway dad from home
Da cops chuckin' us
Out in da middle of the nite
How can he b real wen
i stand here never 2 heal
So **** him and his ******s 2
He died as did a peice of me did
Wen on dat nite i woz...& left 2 die!
I died dat nite!
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2004-04-19 15:50:03]
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Re: I died dat nite!
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 03:57:04 PM AEST
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| I liked it alot. good write. |
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Re: I died dat nite!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:51:47 PM AEST
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You were on a downer when you wrote this one! a good unique write as always.
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Re: I died dat nite!
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 09:44:43 AM AEST
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| GOOD WRITING |
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