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This is who i am
Contributed by
purplestary
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 02:13:22 PM in AEST
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An effigy of tacit words
gesticulating in assent
an interminable frenzy
a demented freak
an anonymous face
in a currupting covert
a vulnerable species
with no chance of survival
a furtice diffident child
living lamentably
with some level of sanctity
to derise my obscene nature
dwelling superficially over hell
Heaven being impenetrable
a decorous writer with no ferver
Incredulous of hope.
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2004-04-19 14:13:22]
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Re: This is who i am
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by neglected1 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 02:21:40 PM AEST
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Yes, yes it was kind of confusing ... but WOW... extremly great write... and yet i find myself thinkin exactly in how you do//
luck to you
i enjoyed this much.. and Great word use
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Re: This is who i am
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by Kie on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 02:50:06 PM AEST
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Hello and welcome to YPDC.
Well I was slightly confused and didn't totally understand BUT complicated poetry is above me.
I thought it was excellent to read though.
Kie |
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Re: This is who i am
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 10:45:39 AM AEST
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| hey wow my brains a bit twisted with all those intelligent words lol they confuse simple minds lol! very inteligent i liked it alot. |
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Re: This is who i am
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:07:19 PM AEST
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reminds me of an english teacher I had who taught as long 'complicated' words which arnt used much in dialect, and told us to speak like that infront of our parents. Who in turn told us they wernt real words...
Anyway great write and dont ever apolagize for a poem being complicated, because its your work and its apology free. Keep it up! |
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Re: This is who i am
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:13:46 PM AEST
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confusing? maybe?, maybe not?but that's the beauty of poetry write what you want and interpert how you want!
well done.
wildejohnny. |
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