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simple
Contributed by
loopylou
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 01:55:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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i will smile today to brighten the world
i will smile to show the world im a happy girl
this is so simple
written by the simpleton that is me
but with no complexities it makes my life happy
i do not wish this poem to be good
but certainly not bad
but if no one comments
ill remain happy and battle off sad
to be happy is to love yourself
and shower and share with everyone else
to be happy is to go to bed each night
ready to wake and laugh at my mistakes
rhyme is so simple
it runs freely
just like a contagious smile that runs from you to me
i ask you now love yourself
with the love your loved with by everyone else
Copyright ©
loopylou
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2004-04-19 13:55:33]
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Re: simple
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by purplestary on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 02:00:42 PM AEST
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| :-D great poem |
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Re: simple
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by Brians_Sweety on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 02:01:57 PM AEST
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Nice poem I thought I would comment on it just to let you know there are some people who care about other and there views on poems!
Stephanie |
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Re: simple
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 02:01:59 PM AEST
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| good poem... good advice! |
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Re: simple
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:44:39 PM AEST
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Awww...loopyy this made me smile.And it is true to form.Happiness you give, tenfold you recieve! Share happy! Spread it contagiously!!!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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