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Hold Me Close
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 12:54:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Please hold me close to you
I can't cope on my own
In this eternal downward spiral
Screaming in the depression
Bleeding for a glimpse of you
Please heal my broken heart
I can feel the tears forming
Please dry them as they start to fall
Please hold me close
And love me through my faults
I'm closing my eyes
To block out the noise
And praying you'll stand beside me
And never let me fall
I need to see your face
And feel your arms around me
Please hold me close
And never let me go
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bobotheclown
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Re: Hold Me Close
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 01:01:13 PM AEST
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so very open and honest.. i feel like this so often.. i can totally relate joel.. keep fighting yeah?
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Re: Hold Me Close
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by Stitch on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 01:02:00 PM AEST
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God is the only one who loves us unconditionally. People just can't, but He can. I know because He loves me that way. He never lets us down. Good write as always.
I will say a prayer for you.
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Re: Hold Me Close
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by shelby on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 01:06:02 PM AEST
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touching honest write Joel I am here if ever you need to talk.
Hugs
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Re: Hold Me Close
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by parkman on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 01:07:21 PM AEST
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| We all need someone to hold us and stop us falling, could feel the anguish in this as you await your prayers to be answered by whoever |
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Re: Hold Me Close
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 01:08:25 PM AEST
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| i think everyone wants this..no matter how much they say they dont. i think this is good, very honst, the best poetry always is. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Hold Me Close
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 01:14:14 PM AEST
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This was very heartwrenching yet so well written.It was easy to see the pain inside through your descriptive verses.I took it as a plea to God,and do know He is always with you and watching over you.He never gives us more than we can handle.As for that special someone,hang in there,when the time will come,your pleas will be answered not only by God,but by someone loving you unconditonnally as well.Much love to you always,
PumpkinPie
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Re: Hold Me Close
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 02:35:49 PM AEST
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Beautiful plea... loved this, Joel.... best of luck...
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Re: Hold Me Close
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by Merry on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 03:22:45 PM AEST
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I really like this poem very much Joel - it is from the soul and that is where all great poetry comes from -
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Re: Hold Me Close
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 03:39:07 PM AEST
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| oh joel this is beautiful...i wish i could help you heal, i really do...love xxx |
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Re: Hold Me Close
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by persia on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:26:50 PM AEST
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I hope God makes u some1 2 luv and b just urs
i luv dis one!
Alwayz av a friendship from
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Re: Hold Me Close
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:09:19 PM AEST
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You say in your authors note that this isnt very good..I am forced to call you a liar sir. This is heartfelt, honest and simply a work of emotional art.
Barkeep, a drink for my friend
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Re: Hold Me Close
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:44:58 PM AEST
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Words spoken from the heart.Where better to pour from??
Simplistic honesty is rare.I love the way these words just really speak volumes to me.More than if they were prettied up with frills.
Aside from having to tell you that this is a very moving piece,I have to say Joel...never critique your own work.Maybe to you its not good enough but to someone out there,it touches on their pleas and wishes as well.The reader can really identify with these feelings.I know these feelings,I've been there,we all have at some stage.Hang in there and never forget what I once told you...
You are special and unique in your own right.Remember this Joel.
Thank you for sharing your heart.
(((joel)))
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Re: Hold Me Close
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by Whisper on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:31:01 PM AEST
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Nice write.
Whisper |
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Re: Hold Me Close
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by Kie on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:49:45 PM AEST
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Raw with honesty and it twisted my heart strings into knots. This came from the depth of your soul and it is my favorite by you. I commend you and praise this one highly.
Kie |
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Re: Hold Me Close
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by CuttersAngel on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 12:23:00 AM AEST
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Hey Joel, after reading the other comments I have some as well. I don't agree with the whole god theory, but I do believe that you will find someone who will love you unconditionally... maybe you already have and you just dont realize it yet... or maybe you do still have to look... but how are you going to find that person if you don't trust anyone with your feelings...??? and trust me, you'll know when you find the right person, the one who loves you unconditionally... give each person enough rope to hang themselves if they ***** up and cross you... you'll find someday that you're giving one person more rope with time and they don't hang themselves.... i'll talk to you more this weekend....
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Re: Hold Me Close
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 06:07:53 PM AEST
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((JOEL)), I wish we lived closer! This was such a sad, honest write. I think you said everything and you said it with such genuine talent and poise.
Lindsey |
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Re: Hold Me Close
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by venkat on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 01:04:14 AM AEST
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Aah..honest and very beautiful request..
lovely poem.. venkat
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