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Life oh life
Contributed by
bhav
on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:24:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life oh life tell me what do you want?
I have done things even when I didn’t want to,
because it was your want.
Life oh life tell me what do you want?
You took away my father, my friends and
my inspiration because it was your want.
Life oh life tell me what do you want?
How long can I stay under the fear of your wants?
Life oh life tell me what do you want?
Yours it seems is an unquenchable thirst of wants.
Life oh life tell me what do you want?
Expectations, assumptions and lots and lots of want.
Life oh life tell me what do you want?
The one thing this humble poet can do is bow down and sacrifice himself for your wants.
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bhav
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2004-04-19 09:24:39]
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Re: Life oh life
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by SugimotoYouki on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:32:27 PM AEST
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undeniable truth put in such poetic words and form..
good work, really...
don't let life get you down, though...
enjoy the hidden pleasures |
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Re: Life oh life
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by blondie_64865 on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 10:34:16 PM AEST
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| your poem speaks what many of us think and are to afraid to say aloud. We all wonder waht tomorrow will bring or the day after trying to figure out the exact meaning of life. Very well put poem. |
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