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Taunting Me
Contributed by
williamdye
on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:37:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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"Watching you from afar
Your sun dress soaked in white
Your tender steps of glee
How you are so damn beautiful
Your laughter entices me
Smiling you stare off
Your eyes so clear
So care free you appear
Treading the water you cross
Looking at me you stop
Your hair turns a morbid black
Your blackened finger nails slice the cool air
Your dress turns a bloodied garment of death
I live in fear
Starring at you glaring at me
Tormented in my solitude
Gently gliding the razor over me
Taunting me
You pierce my skin with pure devotion
As you go under the water
Never to be seen again
Copyright ©
williamdye
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2004-04-19 08:37:52]
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Re: Taunting Me
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:54:44 AM AEST
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| wow, i like this, very dark and chilling. great write. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Taunting Me
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by Kie on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:39:56 AM AEST
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Great poets have the ability to paint their thoughts into the readers minds. You have that ability. I see enormous talent.
Kie |
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Re: Taunting Me
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by parkman on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 11:35:32 AM AEST
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| Chilling and dark, it appeals to me, great write |
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Re: Taunting Me
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:47:38 AM AEST
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You pierce my skin with pure devotion
Wow I loved that line you write with pure, unblemished artistic talent which is rare these days.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Taunting Me
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by I_have_no_name on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 08:48:26 PM AEST
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| incredible. u have talent, and your ability to express what u see is magnificant. i love it. |
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