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Mental Block
Contributed by
parkman
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:49:43 AM in AEST
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Lock me up in a mental block
Said the accused, standing in the dock
Put me in a cell all padded and secure
Clean out my mind, make it pure
These evil thoughts come from deep inside
They just take over, from them I can't hide
These violent actions are something else
They are not me, but the devil himself
My mind is twisted, my visions a blur
But satan won't leave, he'll just reoccur
God is out there, so I hear preached
But the devil keeps hold, christ I can't reach
So lock me up in a mental block
Said the accused, standing in the dock
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2004-04-19 04:49:43]
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Re: Mental Block
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:38:44 AM AEST
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| Another great write!!! pm me? |
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Re: Mental Block
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by starlight4215 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 10:57:23 AM AEST
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| Great write, but is pleading insanity the easy way out? ~ Star |
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Re: Mental Block
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 12:10:57 PM AEST
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can i take my pen and notebook in with me?!
You can sense the frustration of the accused most probably so fed up with life just wanting to be alone...nice one!
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Re: Mental Block
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 12:46:32 PM AEST
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ahh I've felt like that before good poem once again.
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