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Slaughtered
Contributed by
parkman
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:46:36 AM in AEST
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I'm hanging from a hook, with my friends in a row
Quite merrily grazing, just an hour ago
They're slaughtering us all, with a bolt to the brain
I'm watching my friends blood, drip into the drain
I see dead carcass, lying flat out
Skins lying in bundles, being kicked about
I want to escape, but there's no way I can run
Moving up the line, it'll soon be my turn
I see them being carved up, hear bones as they crunch
My friends being prepared, to become sunday lunch
What did we do, to be slaughtered this way
We should be free, to roam and to play
My time has come, I'm not a dumb beast
You barbaric animals, on us you feast
I move up the line, with a shuddering jolt
As fired into my brain, is that deadly bolt
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2004-04-19 04:46:36]
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Re: Slaughtered
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:36:32 AM AEST
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| HAHAHA!!!!! That was one kick ass poem!!!! i LOVED it!!!! It hink it's my favorite one!!!!! Excuse my laughing, I just love torture and blood. It was a very moving poem and extrremely well written! I look forward to reading more work like this from you! Please? Hehehe.... you rock! |
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Re: Slaughtered
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by starlight4215 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 11:01:09 AM AEST
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| Ahhhh. Makes me wonder do I really want that steak for dinner. I think not. Great write from a sheeps point of view. ~ D xxx |
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Re: Slaughtered
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 12:38:59 PM AEST
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mmmmm how disturbing nice poem. I liked it good and descriptive.
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Re: Slaughtered
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 12:53:18 PM AEST
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Well, lol, you certainly succeeded in putting me off of my lunch! Dark subject matter but a very good write. Still think I will have that filet for dinner though. The food chain thing, you know?
Rita |
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Re: Slaughtered
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by deepdarkthinker on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 01:45:34 PM AEST
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| I love it i am a big animial activist and of course a vagan why would peaple eat meat its nasty knowing it was once a living breathing creature |
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