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Hanging On A thought
Contributed by
parkman
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:44:06 AM in AEST
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I'm hanging from a rope, my neck has not broken
The noose now tightened, I'm slowly choking
Eyes are bulging, pressure building up
Sound is gargled, as into my neck, the rope does cut
My feet are kicking, into thin air
Grasping at the rope above, full of despair
I wanted it to end, as I kicked the chair away
Couldn't bare getting up, to face another day
Now mixed thoughts, run through my head
Life isn't bad enough, that I want to be dead
I try to free myself, from my insane plight
As I draw my last gasp, I've lost my fight
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parkman
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2004-04-19 04:44:06]
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Re: Hanging On A thought
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:08:36 AM AEST
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Yikes!!! This is chilling..... so well written... great imagery....
(My neck hurts)
Jenni |
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Re: Hanging On A thought
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by starlight4215 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 11:02:49 AM AEST
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| WOW !!! Nothing could ever be that bad surely ? Great as always ~ D xxx |
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