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Time
Contributed by
chris3btine77
on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:55:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Time changes people; like nothing else can
Look to the future, and make no demands
Let things flow and take there place
There is plenty of distance, but no race
Our love will always last, i hope it will grow
For I have this feeling, we may never know
I want it to last forever: my heart says yes
But sometimes I feel, I am only second best
We spend no time as one anymore
It seems we've lost each other; closed all the doors
Believe me I love you, yes this is true
But I can only ask, if you truly love me too?
Things have gone wrong; we have drifted apart
Hopefully by next week, all new feelings will start
I hate to have asked you, where have you been?
All you do is give that stupid little grin
Believe it or not, that hurts so much inside
But I won't let it out; I've got my pride
Sometimes I cry in the middle of the night
I sit there and wonder; why we always fight
I pray we stay together, from today till tomorrow
From now and forever; to never part in sorrow
Copyright ©
chris3btine77
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2004-04-18 21:55:50]
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Re: Time
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 01:26:36 AM AEST
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Wow this rings SO true for me. I've been there many times, and to an extent, I'm there now. Beautifully written, very touching.
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Re: Time
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by Butterat_Zool on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:12:59 PM AEST
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| MAN! This is perfect! A friend of mine came to me looking for relationship advice the other day. I'm totally gonna send her to your page. Keep writing, I REALLY like your stuff. Butterat Zool. |
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Re: Time
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 06:58:24 PM AEST
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this is beautiful:) warm welcome to ypdc, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Time
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by Harsh on
Monday, 28th March 2011 @ 09:33:17 PM AEST
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There's magic in your hand buddy.
Keep up the YPDC spirit.
Cheers |
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