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A Perfect Pair
Contributed by
Merry
on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:49:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
InternetLove
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_________________
Is there any substance in you
Or are you false through and through
A phantom of a man
I cannot fathom
Uncertainty of constancy
Hinging on your criteria
Unsettles me
And what do you think I see
Arrogance in abundance
Wishful thinking
Disturbs my sleep
How can I have it all
Part time would not be worth it
Distorted images of pleasure
Would only bring us pain
Violate our own code of ethics
If we fell in love it would be insane
A picture of us sits in my brain
So elegant and hedonistic
Having arrived at an understanding
We are at the top of our game
Copyright ©
Merry
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2004-04-18 21:49:49]
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Re: A Perfect Pair
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:16:44 PM AEST
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beautiful contemplation:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A Perfect Pair
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 01:23:25 AM AEST
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Wow this totally reminds me of my relationship with my boyfriend. Very interesting write, I really like it.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: A Perfect Pair
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by arden on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:05:42 PM AEST
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i agree with the comments above.
a very beautiful write. i loved it. well done keep up the amazing work.
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Re: A Perfect Pair
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:18:06 PM AEST
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| This is amazing. I enjoyed reading it. Excellent work. *S* Cynthia |
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