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Welcome Irony
Contributed by
Suz
on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:13:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Opalesence exchanged for a fine whalebone needle,
to mend the holes of lies still unknown.
Leftover amber wasn't enough for a thimble,
each stitch grinding in closer to bone.
Embers equal tiny points reflected in dark eyes,
and nipping the end of the vastness.
Solemnly sewing rips and tears with stitches and ties,
to be burnt to meaningless ashes.
Copyright ©
Suz
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2004-04-18 20:13:14]
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Re: Welcome Irony
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by poet_of_anger on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:35:35 PM AEST
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| very interesting, i like this, very well written, and though i would have like to see the stanza you left out, i will take you at your word that it was bad, although it may not have been, you never know. |
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Re: Welcome Irony
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 11:54:03 PM AEST
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| this was a very nice poem. i do not see much correlation between this and cinderella though. |
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