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Regrets
Contributed by
brookiecookie02
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 07:29:47 PM in AEST
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I thought my possesions were glorious
I thought they were grand
I thought my life was
In my command
But thats all worthless now
Its thrown away
I should have learned how
To live my life a better way
All the awards I received
All the things I received
Its not worth anything anyhow
When I stand before Jesus now
All I cared about was money
And what it could do for me
That was the wrong way to go
But its not till now I see
I should have loved my brother
Been kind to one another
I should have loved each friend
To the end
I should have given more glory to the King
Because thats worth everything
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brookiecookie02
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2004-04-18 19:29:47]
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Re: Regrets
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by lil_angel on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 07:53:12 PM AEST
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| This is really good, you have a good talent. And a great message to say! |
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Re: Regrets
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by Kie on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:13:47 PM AEST
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Honestly I didn't think the poem needed revision I thought it was great.
Kie |
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Re: Regrets
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:32:55 PM AEST
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Another brilliant poem. You're a fantastic writer and your words just flow perfectly.
Hugs 'n Love
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Re: Regrets
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by face-in-the-crowd on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:04:37 PM AEST
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I'm Speechless.
-You know who |
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