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To Need
Contributed by
isaiyan
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 06:07:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I wish i could turn it off.
creation never seems to need
I didn't decide to make it work
it just seems to be
living just to see what is aware..
i'll be around if you decide to stay near
feeling like hot anger entraped within me
studdering thoughts seem to take its time to need.
i wish these were good times
i wished that it would make sense to me
i wish these were bad times
but it just seems to be
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isaiyan
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2004-04-18 18:07:30]
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Re: To Need
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by Kie on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 07:38:12 PM AEST
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"i wish these were good times
i wished that it would make sense to me
i wish these were bad times
but it just seems to be"
The last stanza just wrapped it up for me. I thought it was great. Reminders that we all struggle onward.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Kie
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Re: To Need
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by Remy on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:08:03 PM AEST
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oi vey, sounds like you're in the same middle point as me right now! interesting write, kinda wish i would have ranted it out... lol... good stuff, really! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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