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Temptation
Contributed by
Stormydwn
on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 04:55:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Partial frames
Stills of Passion
Flashes of Pleasure
Hints of Pain
Pulsing words
Flames igniting
Only imaginary
In my mind
Awake and lucid?
Dead and heavenly?
Promises of hell?
Even better.
So tangible
Frame by frame
Fogging sanity
Beyond any reason
Carnal emotion
Possibilities eternal
Feed this Seether
What she needs
For birth so savage
and necessary
Most Inevitable.
Copyright ©
Stormydwn
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2004-04-18 16:55:26]
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Re: Temptation
(User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 06:28:33 PM AEST
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| This is a really good write! I am glad i had a chance to read it! |
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Re: Temptation
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by Remy on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:23:00 PM AEST
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seems like one massive streamline of jumbled thoughts all together... interesting writing style, i like it! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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