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There u are
Contributed by
Vickie
on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 04:24:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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there u are staring back at me with those questioning eyes,
wut should i say to u next,
wut will keep u from turning and walking away,
wut can i do to let u know how much i need u.
there u are staring back at me with those puzzling eyes,
how can i get u to understand me,
how should i touch u this time to make it count,
how will u react to my pleas.
there u are staring back at me with those dreamy eyes,
why didnt i think before i spoke,
why should u forgive me again,
why do i act the way i do.
there u are staring back at me with those bautiful brown eyes,
wen u forgave me i promised not to repeat,
wen u kissed me my knees got weak,
wen u said those words to me my heart skipped a beat.
...i will always love u!
Copyright ©
Vickie
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2004-04-18 16:24:37]
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Re: There u are
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 04:56:38 PM AEST
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| I could not get into your poem, sorry. Maybe you should take advantage of the spell check this site has to offer. Again sorry . |
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Re: There u are
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 05:24:33 PM AEST
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I Think This Is A Little Sad But Beautifully Written... :-) I Like It And Welcome To Ypdc...
Well Done.......
******LoVe**AnGeL******
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Re: There u are
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by eternallyloved on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 05:34:03 PM AEST
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| great mesage. really evokes emotion. beatifully written. hope to hear fro you more. |
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Re: There u are
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by Remy on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:12:17 PM AEST
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emotional romantic twinges, i'm a sucker for reading writes like these... wonderful write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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