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love cruel
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:43:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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they are inside of me...
echo's of raised voices,
repeating over and over in my memory.
screams as my heart tries to break away,
from this torturous cage that you keep locked inside you,
why did you make me swallow the key...?
holding me back from my only way out,
where can i turn? how can i breathe?
i try to escape but i cannot see,
you've cast your shadow over me...
will you let me go?
my internal cage is killing me,
let me go, save this heart...
i just want us to be free.
i watch the shadows in the hall,
calling me...beconing with the dark,
wanting to hide but trying to be seen,
is this what love is all about?
all i need is to escape from you...
love is too cruel...
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Re: love cruel
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by Remy on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:57:53 PM AEST
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heh, coherent or not, it's good writing. no worries, the sense will come soon enough! ;0)
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Re: love cruel
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th December 2006 @ 06:51:33 PM AEST
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oh sweetie ... this was far and away before I even joined, but
I ADORE it. I especially like the last line of the first stanza. brilliant
I am akin to the emotions surmounting within this ..
and I get how beautiful and painful it is to endure. Hun,
you are amazing. Always.
your poetry is inspiring and so heart wrenching.
You have this ability to draw the reader into an emotion
that may never have occurred to them when first they
began to read .. wondrous word choices, sweets.
Merry Christmas and a most happy New Year to you, hun!
*hugs and all that jazz*
~Breezy |
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