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freshly craved
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:41:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Freshly Carved
i sit.. confused..scared.. alone
trapped in this hell hole all on my own
i clutch myself, the only hug i ever received
i was lied to, too many times, i was deceived
im crying
inside im dying
from me lying
i hide the cuts feshly carved
when it came to love and care i was starved
im at an all time low
i have no where to go
im falling apart, im such a mess
pain, sorrow, very depressed
full of emotion
due to comotion
i hate my life, im saying good bye
i hate myself i want to die
im suffering i cant go on
im playing a game in life that cant be won
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vampyrekiss
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2004-04-18 15:41:47]
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Re: freshly craved
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 04:20:06 PM AEST
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very well expressed.. i like this..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: freshly craved
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by Remy on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:56:12 PM AEST
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i remember writing like this, all depressed with words so forceful because they're depressed wordings... good write, hope the game goes to your favour soon... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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