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You Saved from Suicide

Contributed by lexxie on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:39:33 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Dark room filled with hate. As i stand in the middle of the room with the gun loaded my life flashes by. My friends who betrayed me (gun highers) The father who hates me (guns half way up) The loved that failed me (guns to my head) Then i think about the one who saved me. I fall to the ground blood shot eyes bleeding from the perfect suicide i think of your face and open my eyes look to the door and i see a new light




Copyright © lexxie ... [ 2004-04-18 15:39:33]
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Re: You Saved from Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by brookiecookie02 on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:42:01 PM AEST
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a VERY touching poem. im so sry u felt that way. i really hope ur doin ok now. a very beautiful poem. i look foward to seeing more of ur stuff.
-brooke


Re: You Saved from Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:53:09 PM AEST
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beautiful imagery, wish it didn't have to go through that way, but still... great poetry... ;0)
~Remy~


Re: You Saved from Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:02:17 PM AEST
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Now this is a great poem!!! Told u that u had great potential!!LOL
~Donna~


Re: You Saved from Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 12:42:19 AM AEST
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May that person love you always May your beacon light never cease to burn bright.
Take care.
David




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