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Those Good Old Days
Contributed by
shahan
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:45:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The coloured memories of
The good old days,
Turned into a greyish yellow.
Alas! the faded memories,
Swim in the colour of mind,
Yet,
Did not float in the deep ocean.
Those were the days, my friends,
I bear deep inside me.
All the reddish quarrels
Ended in the love of green heart.
We reaped together
The seeds of isolation.
The trees of passion
Were all full of flowers.
Those were the days, my friends,
I bear deep inside me.
The shatterd souls
Flew here and there
And one soul was formed,
In the dull noons.
The song of rain
Still brings back the drunk days.
Those were the days, my friends,
I bear deep inside me.
The nights were full of dream,
Reality was the day,
Waves of despair struck hard,
And still we stayed together.
Those were the days, my friends,
I bear deep inside me.
A sweet sour wickedness,
A bunch of eleven souls,
Searched the love tirelessly,
We threw away the lust
And embraced love
With all our purity.
Those were the days, my friends,
I bear deep inside me.
Copyright ©
shahan
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2004-04-18 14:45:22]
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Re: Those Good Old Days
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by bernard on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:55:04 PM AEST
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Ah! yes the good old days. Great write I congratulate you onthis excellent poem and give top marks for writing the same.
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Re: Those Good Old Days
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by Remy on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:38:39 PM AEST
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surreal colouring in your words, quite intriuiging - great writing! ;0)
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