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When you lose a loved one
Contributed by
Amanda-Ruth
on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:30:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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When you lose a loved one,
It's hard to carry on,
You'll never think you'll cope,
Now that they have gone.
You'll laugh, you'll cry,
You'll stop and sigh,
You'll ask yourself 'Why me?'
Just look above,
For the answer,
and who do you think you'll see?
The Lord is always there for you,
and so he shall remain,
He can help you through tough times,
and help to ease the pain,
But time is the greatest healer,
it can help you every day,
You'll feel so much stronger,
in each and every way
But never will you ever lose,
the loved one far away,
as they'll live on inside you,
through every passing day
So just remember their smile,
their laughter and their tears,
And forever they will be with you,
throughout the coming years,
Now left are the memories,
forever in your heart,
and however far away they are,
you know you'll never part
Copyright ©
Amanda-Ruth
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2004-04-18 13:30:04]
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Re: When you lose a loved one
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:38:23 PM AEST
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This is so beautifully written..and so true.... such good advice..... Thank you...
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Re: When you lose a loved one
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by Remy on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:57:04 PM AEST
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encouraging write, something a number of people could breathe in like fresh air... beautiful write...
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Re: When you lose a loved one
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:04:25 PM AEST
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I enjoyed your write very much.
I can honestly say that memories are what sustain me many a time. Folks like these leave such a impact they are remembered r somewhere in someones heart forever always.
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Re: When you lose a loved one
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by eternallyloved on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:24:41 PM AEST
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| This is such a beautifully written poem. I just have to say that for me, the greatest healer wasnt time, though that was very helpful. You mentioned the Lord being there for u all the time, but went on to say time was the greatest healer and that is an interesting point of view. For me the Lord was the GREATEST healer because he carried me through the time. I loved reading this cause it gave me insight on other views. You wrote this very well. God Bless. |
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Re: When you lose a loved one
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 05:38:13 PM AEST
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| thank you for this... I needed to read it. it's beautiful. |
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